Portfolio Sketches! :)

Oookay, so I need some feedback, if you have a sec, on my portfolio sketches before I start the final pieces! ย There’s only 8 pictured here but the 9th and 10th will be the color version of the the pig holding the newspaper ๐Ÿ™‚ It’s a stand alone piece at the beginning and end, and 4 double page spreads. I really appreciate this guys, thanks so much! ย And please be honest and thoughtful-no “Cute!” or “Good job!”-I need real critiques! ๐Ÿ™‚ I guess I should add that I’m striving to be a picture book illustrator so keep that in mind when giving suggestions ๐Ÿ™‚ Oh and they will all be in color except for one spread of the pig w/ newspaper-that will be a value spread and a color spread. Thanks again! P.s-the newspaper will be filled in with newspapery things for the final piece ๐Ÿ™‚

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